Personal Writing: My Favorite Vacation

Part I of Essay
Favorite vacation was going on the cruise trip with my family. We had so much fun it was unbelievable the way they met all of our needs. We went on this trip for seven days and six nights. We had the best time of our lives. They had lots and lots of activities to do on the ....

Part II of Essay
.... best beaches you could imagine. The water was so clear and the sand was so white and soft it felt like a pillow. We went swimming over there for about 2 hours. While we were there you could see the bottom at least 30 feet deep. There were no rocks to cut you at all it was just like the sand on the beach. It was lots of fun. When we got tired we went back to the ship and got cleaned up for dinner. Our next island was St. Martinique. This island was were we got to go up a big mountain in a cab and at the top was a big cave that was filed wi ....